| The prose of the novel is smooth and has a pleasant rhythm to
                it. Reading it is as effortlessly as swimming with the current.
                The story of the novel is narrated in the first person, but with
                a difference. Contrary to the usual pattern in which the story
                is told by the principal character, we find in this novel not
                one but two protagonists. Both of them (Somsundar and Manju)
                narrate their respective stories in alternate chapters.
 Manju’s story
                centres around her relationship with her beloved and other
                characters. Her life is secure, monotonous and nothing
                substantial happens to her. However, one day she goes to a bar,
                gets drunk, swings in the arms of a couple of gentlemen and
                finally collapses on the dancing floor. This incident leaves the
                readers clueless about the significance of the proceeding.
                Perhaps the object was to offer some excitement. The story of
                Somsundar focuses on his suffering with occasional glances into
                the better times he has lived through. His family goes through
                turbulent times when first his elder brother and then he himself
                join the Naxalites. This situation is further aggravated when
                his brother suddenly disappears and there is no clue his
                whereabouts. The narration of a incident in which Somsundar
                escapes after being surrounded by hired killers is particularly
                good. The entire sequence is picturesque, horrific and
                hair-raising. Along with the
                narration of the main story the novelist has also put together
                absorbing sketches of the other characters. He has adeptly
                described the pathetic circumstances of the peasants, unemployed
                and the lepers by portraying the inhuman conditions in which
                they were forced to survive during a drought. To keep their body
                and soul together many of them literally take up begging in the
                streets while the more unfortunate ones have to live on rodents.
                The journalistic stint of the writer had been of an exceptional
                assistance to him while penning down ground realities with such
                remarkable clarity. However, the
                novelist seem to have unconsciously justified some of the dark
                deeds of the male protagonist. Somsundar harbours revengeful
                thoughts, smashes various musical instruments of his one-time
                beloved, Mala we read anything against him. He is definitely not
                as noble and as blameless as he is portrayed to be. It appears
                that the novelist at some stage grew so fond of him that
                unconsciously he adopted a rather considerate attitude towards
                him, much like an indulgent father would favour his favourite
                son. The novel winds up
                on a pitiable but realistic note. Somsundar yearns to return
                home from his association with the Naxalites but finds it
                difficult to do so. He longs to relish friendly moments with his
                family and friends. Ultimately he knocks down his comrades and
                leaves the organisation knowing it fully well that he wouldn’t
                be spread. The readers can only pray he was.
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